[Vogata]

Was that all the criticism we could get out of you? In fact I adore them, all and am eager to see them change and grow.
This is more of learning how to see what is getting worse and what will/can improve. The joy of locking back on notes and find what the results where.


Cppond
Has had no.5 up and I was mistaken (again) correct is:

The red goes down and touches upper lip and from corner of mouth makes a line to middle of eye follows it up and around down to middle some millimetres towards gill than up in a lope and down again below eye and covers most of gill plate. Gill plate red but now into gills shiro “rim”.