Thread: 4 step kohaku
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Old 04-25-2007   #2 (permalink)
MikeM
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I cannot answer your questions from the photo, but it looks pretty good. What stands out is the equi-distant separation of the 4 steps. This is not common, but when it occurs the result is a lack of visual rhythm... the fish becomes boring. Yours, however, is actually enhanced IMO by having the Hi spread over the face a bit more than we usually like to see. As it grows larger, I think this will give the face character. An interesting fish for tosai... the sashi etc shows a lot of development on the way.
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