Geeez Nancy, you know how I feel about judging koi from pictures.....you can't! You can only judge pictures of koi from pictures.
All that being said, let's help Sterling make his own decision. First, have you seen this koi in person? If not, do you know someone in the area that can look at it for your that you trust as an unbiased observer? If you have seen it or you have somene else look at it for you here's some questions to get answered:
1) is the Koi as white as depicted?
2) Is the motoguro as tight as it seems on the koi's right side and balanced with the left pec (not visible from photo).
3) How thick is the beni in real life?
4) Does the skin have the apparent luster that it does in the photo?
5) Is the body structure as depicted in the photo?
Now, as for pattern, print out the first photo and get out a black "sharpie." color in the underlying/undeveloped sumi.
6) How does the pattern look to you now?
If all of the above seem favorable to you, have at it!
Steve