I'm looking for a nit to pick..................... hard to find any.
#11 Big head, Big Body, Big Pattern, SMOOOOOOOOTH lines from head to tail, more of that wonderful shiroji you've been striving for (I think you got it down bro'

), Beni thats going nowhere but up. This looks to me like the kind of Kohak that will become the graceful, elegant lady in some lucky dawg's pond at 30"+ easily.
Is that a pencil thin Kuchibeni I see on her lips?
#12 Another good looking Tancho... Not quite as perfectly formed as the first, but very nice. The tail tube is not as good as it could be, but a little time should take care of that. The only real question mark is will the sumi continue to fill in the gaps? Looks like it could.
#13 This is going to be a very attractive fish. Clean torpedo form, nice white ground, beni developing/refining from the head back, sumi developing/refining from the tail forward, and the pattern has a nicely balanced offsetting placement. Very nice, but probably not a show stopper due to the slender body form.
#14 Another eye catcher. The pattern is very well balanced, hi plates cleanly broken but close enough together to maintain symmetry as the fish grows. They wrap down the sides well which will maintain a strong look as she puts on girth. Like the #13 fish, her beni is deepening from the head back, and this one needs several years to really finish well. She also looks to have a hint of kuchibeni.
#15 The Oyagoi switch from the #5 fish to this one is plain to see. Both had the sumi package, but the difference in beni quality is night and day. In some ways having male and female siblings in this photo array gives us an idea of how the girls will finish if kept well. (The beni on the sanke babes has great things ahead if this boy is any indication

) The beni on this one looks strong enough to hold while the sumi continues to laquer up. He may never be the biggest fish in the pond, but he has several good years ahead of him for some happy ponder.